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Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
>> Why is English fluency significant for you?

I think English Fluency is very important. Because words can be confused.
For example, river means flowed water hometown or contryside.
But liver means it's one of the organs in mankind.
these words just different 'r', 'l'. however, these means have big different.
So, if i am not good at pronunciation, foreign people misunderstand my opinion.
That's why i practice english fluence.

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Thank you for this Lee. English can indeed be a confusing language. 

I think English Fluency is very important. Because words can be confused.
>>>  I think English fluency is very important because words can be confusing.  
For example, river means flowed water hometown or contryside.
>>>  For example, river means flowing water in our hometown or the countryside.  
But liver means it's one of the organs in mankind.
>>>  But liver means one of the organs of mankind.  
these words just different 'r', 'l'. 
>>> These words just differ in one letter which is the L and R.    
however, these means have big different.
>>> However, they have big difference in meaning.
So, if i am not good at pronunciation, foreign people misunderstand my opinion.
>>> So, if I am not good at pronunciation, foreign people will misunderstand my opinion.  
That's why i practice english fluence.
>>> That's why I practice for English fluency.   
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