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Actually, I don't know much about major tourist attractions.
I don't know any famous restaurants or famous tourist attractions around my house, And I don't know any of the tourist attractions in my country.
I searched various tourist attractions in Korea because I want to answered this question, And yet I still don't know, So my answerd is I don't know!
I don't know much about tourist attractions in my country, but I'm showing you a picture of my house with better scenery and coffee taste than any other cafe.

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Hi Da Hye,

I wanted to thank you for completing your homework. You did a good job! I appreciate your effort and hard work. Even though you mentioned that you don't know much about famous tourist attractions near your house or in your country, it's okay. Learning about new places takes time, and we will explore more together. You¡¯re house sounds like a lovely place with beautiful scenery and great coffee. I'm glad you shared something special with me. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to our next class.           

~Teacher Cathy

 

Actually, I don't know much about major tourist attractions.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Actually, I¡¯m not very familiar with major tourist attractions.

I don't know any famous restaurants or famous tourist attractions around my house, And I don't know any of the tourist attractions in my country.

>>I don't know any famous restaurants or famous tourist attractions around my house, and I don't know any of the tourist attractions in my country.

I searched various tourist attractions in Korea because I want to answered this question, And yet I still don't know, So my answerd is I don't know!

>>I searched various tourist attractions in Korea because I want to answer this question, and yet I still don't know, so my answer is I don't know!

I don't know much about tourist attractions in my country, but I'm showing you a picture of my house with better scenery and coffee taste than any other cafe.

>>I don¡¯t know much about tourist attractions in my country, but I¡¯m going to show you a picture of my house with better scenery and coffee that taste better than the ones in cafes.

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