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Why do children like playing online games?

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Children likes online game, because oline game is good way at spend time.
And most of children play game for only fun.
For this reason, many children play game and like it.
But adult like game too.

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Hi there Da Yeon~! ^^  Thanks for diligently doing your homework! Continue to be a kind student! Have a great week! ^^
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Children likes online game, because oline game is good way at spend time.
>>> Children like playing online games, because online games is a good way of spending time.
And most of children play game for only fun.
>>> Most children play games for fun.
For this reason, many children play game and like it.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
But adult like game too.
>>> But adults like playing online games too.
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