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HOMEWORK for 06/29
Write 5-10 sentences
TOPIC: Describe your usual routine

usually i eat lunch certain but breakfast and diner eat uncertain

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Hi, Min Seog! Thank you so much once again for taking the time to answer this homework. Let's continue to talk about your routine in the class so that you practice your skills even more. See you, then! - T. Marie ^^ 
usually i eat lunch certain but breakfast and diner eat uncertain
>> I usually eat lunch at a certain time, but not for breakfast and dinner. 
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