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My high school life

작성자: 김*림
2023-06-29 3015

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My high school life in South Korea is very hard but meaningful. Now my life is just filled with going school, academy, studying English. It’s really tough, but I think this year is the most happiest year after I enter a high school. I met great friends that get along well with me. They makes me laugh a lot, and we also talk a lot about a college entrance examination. Also, before going academy, I eat dinner and go cafe with my friends, and that’s really relaxing time for me. Of course studying all day long is really hard, but this little things makes my day blissful and livable.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi, Emily! Thank you so much for answering your homework and for your time as well.
I really appreciate it :)
See you in class! ~

-T. Nikki :) 

My high school life in South Korea is very hard but meaningful.
>> CORRECT!
Now my life is just filled with going school, academy, studying English.
>> Now my life is just filled with going to school, the academy, and studying English.
 It’s really tough, but I think this year is the most happiest year after I enter a high school.
>>It’s really tough, but I think this year is the happiest year since I entered high school.
I met great friends that get along well with me. They makes me laugh a lot, and we also talk a lot about a college entrance examination. 
>> I met great friends that get along well with me. They make me laugh a lot, and we also talk a lot about a college entrance examination. 
Also, before going academy, I eat dinner and go cafe with my friends, and that’s really relaxing time for me. Of course studying all day long is really hard, but this little things makes my day blissful and livable.
>> Also, before going to the academy, my friends and I will eat some dinner and will go visit a cafe together, and that is really relaxing for me. Of course, studying all day long is really hard, but these little things make my day blissful and livable.
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