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The fiercest animal that I have seen

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I think the tigers are the fiercest animal that I have seen. They look even very fierce and they are also very strong and good at hunting. Most of all their nickname is The king of jungle. That is why tigers might the fiercest animal.

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I think the tigers are the fiercest animal that I have seen. They look even very fierce and they are also very strong and good at hunting. Most of all their nickname is The king of jungle. That is why tigers might the fiercest animal.
>> I think the tigers are the fiercest animal that I have seen. They even look savage because they are very strong and good at hunting. Most of all their nickname is The king of the jungle. That is why tigers might be the fiercest animal.
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