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What are some effective measures social media platforms can implement to combat online abuse and hat

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2023-06-27 1857

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There are no countermeasures to decrease the level of online abuse and hate speech in social media. First, there are technical issues. There is development in artificial intelligence and machine learning, but such advancement is not enough to tackle a large set of data promptly. Facebook alone has more than 3 billion users. To effectively fight against the various online abuses, it is important to quickly address the comments prior to their spreading. There was a case when a Brazilian soccer player posted revenge porn and took several hours for Facebook to take it down. Secondly, there is no standard for online abuse and hate speech. Discrimination and hatred are very subjective terms. It can be offensive to one person but not to others, so it is difficult to standardize. Therefore, many platforms hire locals to monitor the contents of their mother tongue. However, it can also lead to human capital costs.

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Thank you for this as well Aciel. Exactly my point! It would be difficult to completely eradicate hate speech and false information online. Especially that there are million of people active online.

There are no countermeasures to decrease the level of online abuse and hate speech in social media. 
>>> correct
First, there are technical issues. 
>>> correct
There is development in artificial intelligence and machine learning, but such advancement is not enough to tackle a large set of data promptly. 
>>> correct
>>> OR: There has been development in artificial intelligence and machine learning, but such advancement is not enough to tackle a large set of data promptly. 
Facebook alone has more than 3 billion users. 
>>> correct
To effectively fight against the various online abuses, it is important to quickly address the comments prior to their spreading. 
>>> correct
There was a case when a Brazilian soccer player posted revenge porn and took several hours for Facebook to take it down. 
>>> OR: There was a case when a Brazilian soccer player posted revenge porn and it took several hours for Facebook to take it down. 
>>> OR: There was a case when a Brazilian soccer player posted revenge porn and it took several hours before Facebook took it down. 
Secondly, there is no standard for online abuse and hate speech. 
>>> correct
Discrimination and hatred are very subjective terms. 
>>> correct
It can be offensive to one person but not to others, so it is difficult to standardize. 
>>> correct
Therefore, many platforms hire locals to monitor the contents of their mother tongue. 
>>> correct
However, it can also lead to human capital costs.
>>> correct

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