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What are the disadvantages and advantages of online education?

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The disadvantage of online class as far as I'm concerned can make you more lazy than before. For example, if I have a offline class, so I have to go until 9AM. For me to wake up at least before an hour. But the online class? I could do it as a minute ahead of time. On the other hand for an advantage, I guess it's more convenient than before. Also, except for school and Academi, you can attend a class wherever you are.

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Lovely Wednesday, Elic!! If you are determined to achieve something, be focused on your target and have confidence in yourself. Your hard work will definitely bring success for you.

The disadvantage of online class as far as I'm concerned can make you more lazy than before.
>>> The disadvantage of online classes, as far as I'm concerned, is that they can make you more lazy than before.

For example, if I have a offline class, so I have to go until 9AM.
>>> For example, if I have an offline class, I have to get up at 9 a.m.

For me to wake up at least before an hour.
>>> For me to wake up at least an hour before.

But the online class? I could do it as a minute ahead of time.
>>> But the online class? I could do it a minute ahead of time.

On the other hand for an advantage, I guess it's more convenient than before. 
>>> On the other hand, for an advantage, I guess it's more convenient than before.

Also, except for school and Academi, you can attend a class wherever you are.
>>> Also, except for school and the academy, you can attend a class wherever you are.
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