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The best thing about Korea

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I think that the best thing about Korea is the safety. In Korea, when we go cafe, most of people leaves their stuff like phone, laptop, or tablet on their desk when they go to bathroom, or when they go out for a second. We don¡¯t worry about it because we know that anyone would take it, and it¡¯s natural not to take anyone¡¯s stuff. I think this can happen because Korean believe each other. Also, most public places even in transportation there are lots of cctvs, so that make people arouse attention. When I went to Europe, I saw lots of people lost their wallet or passport, so that¡¯s also why I think Korea is really safe.

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Hi, Emily! Thank you so much for your time and for answering your homework as well.
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I think that the best thing about Korea is the safety.
>>CORRECT!
 In Korea, when we go cafe, most of people leaves their stuff like phone, laptop, or tablet on their desk when they go to bathroom, or when they go out for a second.
>>> In Korea, when we go to a cafe, most people just leave their stuff like phones, laptops, or tablets on their desks when they go to the bathroom, or when they go out for a second.
We don¡¯t worry about it because we know that anyone would take it, and it¡¯s natural not to take anyone¡¯s stuff.
>> We don't worry about it because we know that here in Korea people don't take other people's stuff. 
 I think this can happen because Korean believe each other. 
>> I think this is because, we, Koreans trust each other. 
Also, most public places even in transportation there are lots of CCTV so that make people arouse attention. 
>> Also, in most public places even in transportation there are lots of CCTV around to warn people. 
When I went to Europe, I saw lots of people lost their wallet or passport, so that¡¯s also why I think Korea is really safe.
>> When I was in Europe, I saw lots of people lose their wallets or passports, that's why I think Korea is really safe.
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