¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽŠ³»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*È­
2023-06-26 1258

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Working adults still live with their parents, but whether they have to pay rent or receive guidance seems to depend on the situation.
If you are a single adult with a stable job, I think it is right to pay your parents some amount of money in the name of rent.
Even adult children with jobs because their parents can afford it seem like they can happily stay together for free.
And in my case, I got pregnant at the same time as getting married, so I quit my job to raise children and become a full-time housewife, but my husband suddenly got sick and quit his job.
And he lived independently and went into his parents' house for a year to save money by doing business, organizing, and living without paying rent.
After that, I saved up my share of money for a year and became independent again.
So far, the family of 4 is doing well, and I am always grateful to my parents.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Eliana!
Thank you for sharing this. I totally understand the situation of living with my parents because I am in that  kind of situation. Have a wonderful day!
T. Aki~

Working adults still live with their parents, but whether they have to pay rent or receive guidance seems to depend on the situation.
>>> CORRECT!

If you are a single adult with a stable job, I think it is right to pay your parents some amount of money in the name of rent.
>>> CORRECT!

Even adult children with jobs, because their parents can afford it, seem like they can happily stay together for free.
>>> CORRECT!

And in my case, I got pregnant at the same time as getting married, so I quit my job to raise children and become a full-time housewife, but my husband suddenly got sick and quit his job.
>>> CORRECT!

And he lived independently and went into his parent's house for a year to save money by doing business, organizing, and living without paying rent.
>>> CORRECT!

After that, I saved up my share of money for a year and became independent again.
>>> After that, I saved up my share of the money for a year and became independent again.

So far, the family of 4 is doing well, and I am always grateful to my parents.
>>> CORRECT!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
130179 What is the implication of having an aging population? ¹Ý* ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 1922
130178 How often do you feel afraid? ÀÓ*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 1
130177 Behavior is someone\'s life ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 0
130176 which among your goals have you already achieved? ±è*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 0
130175 Have you ever eaten in a restaurant alone? If not, would you... Á¶*Áö ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 1
130174 Envy and jealousy È«*±â ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 2035
130173 What are some types of physical activities that people can do... ÀÌ*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 1504
130172 Why is regular exercise important for maintaining a healthy... ÀÌ*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 1913
130171 homwork ¹Ú*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 2
130170 Homework ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2023-08-14 2336
130169 08-13 homework ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 1
130168 Homework ±è*´Ô ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 1366
130167 08-13 homework ±è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 3
130166 homework Á¶*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 2605
130165 What do you think should people do if there\'s a typhoon coming? °­*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 2414
130164 Worst vice ÃÖ*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 2542
130163 Action of no reply ÃÖ*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 2445
130162 My right person ÃÖ*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 1870
130161 Having vices. ÃÖ*ȯ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 1544
130160 Does what we see on television and in movies influence people to... ¾ö*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2023-08-13 1231

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ Ķ¸°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öÆ° Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽŠ±ÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î ÇÏ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04