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Working adults still live with their parents, but whether they have to pay rent or receive guidance seems to depend on the situation.
If you are a single adult with a stable job, I think it is right to pay your parents some amount of money in the name of rent.
Even adult children with jobs because their parents can afford it seem like they can happily stay together for free.
And in my case, I got pregnant at the same time as getting married, so I quit my job to raise children and become a full-time housewife, but my husband suddenly got sick and quit his job.
And he lived independently and went into his parents' house for a year to save money by doing business, organizing, and living without paying rent.
After that, I saved up my share of money for a year and became independent again.
So far, the family of 4 is doing well, and I am always grateful to my parents.

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Eliana!
Thank you for sharing this. I totally understand the situation of living with my parents because I am in that  kind of situation. Have a wonderful day!
T. Aki~

Working adults still live with their parents, but whether they have to pay rent or receive guidance seems to depend on the situation.
>>> CORRECT!

If you are a single adult with a stable job, I think it is right to pay your parents some amount of money in the name of rent.
>>> CORRECT!

Even adult children with jobs, because their parents can afford it, seem like they can happily stay together for free.
>>> CORRECT!

And in my case, I got pregnant at the same time as getting married, so I quit my job to raise children and become a full-time housewife, but my husband suddenly got sick and quit his job.
>>> CORRECT!

And he lived independently and went into his parent's house for a year to save money by doing business, organizing, and living without paying rent.
>>> CORRECT!

After that, I saved up my share of money for a year and became independent again.
>>> After that, I saved up my share of the money for a year and became independent again.

So far, the family of 4 is doing well, and I am always grateful to my parents.
>>> CORRECT!
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