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Why do many people from different parts of the world want to improve their English?

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There are many reasons for improving English. I can explain why do many people want to improve their English especially in Korea. In case of students, The reason why they want to improve English is the score. In case of worker, The reason is that English is so relevant to work because many company work together with overseas companies.

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HOMEWORK



Hello!


Thank you for accomplishing your homework! Writing some sentences in English also contribute to your constant practice. Stay positive, work hard, and success will be knocking on your door. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!



Regards,

Teacher Lexie



There are many reasons for improving English.
>> CORRRECT!
I can explain why do many people want to improve their English especially in Korea. 
>> I can explain why many people want to improve their English, especially in Korea. 
In case of students, The reason why they want to improve English is the score. 
>> In the case of students, the reason why they want to improve their English is the score in the examination.
In case of worker, The reason is that English is so relevant to work because many company work together with overseas companies.
>> In the case of workers, the reason is that English is so relevant to work because many companies work together with oversea companies.


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