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Computer is very good and helpful product.
Because it help kids to research about their homework.
And also, adults can make their reports with computers.
Sometimes we get bored we can do gaming computer and we can serf the Internet .

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Great job Eugene! Thank you for sending your homework. Have a wonderful weekend, See you on Monday!
~ T. Demi ^^

Computer is very good and helpful product.
>> Computer is a very good and helpful product.
Because it help kids to research about their homework.
>> Because it helps kids to research their homework.
And also, adults can make their reports with computers.
>> Also, adults can make their reports with computers.
Sometimes we get bored we can do gaming computer and we can serf the Internet .
>> Sometimes when we are bored, we can play computer games and surf the internet as well.
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