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What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with a person who is very different from you?

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If I'm working with very different person, it would have many negative things than positive things.
Because, the work is required team works.
If someone is different me, it is hard to cooperate.

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Hi, JT. Thank you for answering your homework. Please take note of the corrections I did on your essay. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
If I'm working with very different person, it would have many negative things than positive things.
-T. Julia
>> Correct
Because, the work is required team works.
>> The work requires team work.
If someone is different me, it is hard to cooperate.
>> If someone is different from me, it is hard to cooperate.
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