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I would recommend Korea to foreigners.

작성자: 김*호
2023-06-22 689

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I would recommend Korea to foreigner because there are many place and culture that can only be experienced in Korea.

First, we have a lot of ancient palace and temple that was made in 15~18 century. And you can find Buddha granite statue wade made in 6~7 century. And the transportation to destination is quite well. If you interested about oriental culture and Buddhism, you can experience a lot in our country.

Second, you can feel the harmony of modern infrastructure and traditional building. Many ancient place and infrastructure are located in Seoul and you can go there very easily by high quality subway system.

And, unlike the other usual Asian, Korean usually feel happy when they help to foreigner so you will feel that people in this country are kind to you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Kyoung Ho! A wonderful day to you! Thank you much for answering your homework. I really appreciate it!

Keep it up! :)

-Teacher Nikki 



I would recommend Korea to foreigner because there are many place and culture that can only be experienced in Korea.
>> I would recommend Korea to foreigners because there are many places and different cultures that can only be experienced in Korea.

First, we have a lot of ancient palace and temple that was made in 15~18 century. And you can find Buddha granite statue wade made in 6~7 century. And the transportation to destination is quite well. If you interested about oriental culture and Buddhism, you can experience a lot in our country.
>> First, we have a lot of ancient palaces and temple that was made around the 15th-18th century. You can also find Buddha's granite statue made around the 6th~7th century. The transportation to every destination is quite well. If you are interested in Oriental culture and Buddhism, you can experience a lot in our country.

Second, you can feel the harmony of modern infrastructure and traditional building. Many ancient place and infrastructure are located in Seoul and you can go there very easily by high quality subway system.
>> Second, you can feel the harmony between modern infrastructure and traditional buildings. Many ancient places and infrastructure are located in Seoul and you can go there very easily by a high-quality subway system.

And, unlike the other usual Asian, Korean usually feel happy when they help to foreigner so you will feel that people in this country are kind to you.
>> Lastly, unlike the other usual Asians, Koreans usually feel happy when they help foreigners, they would like to make you feel that we are kind to other people. 
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