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What activities do you enjoy doing during the summer season?

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What activities do you enjoy doing during the summer season?
=> I learn exercise that I want to do while summer vacation to diet.
I have ever been jumping, swimming, hels, joging and walk with my pet.
I want to do activity that strerch my body like yoga and pillates this summer vacation but yoga and pillates is so expensive, I learn at the home as youtube.
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=> I learn exercise that I want to do while summer vacation to diet.
>> I learn exercise that I want to do on summer summer vacation to lose weight.
I have ever been jumping, swimming, hels, joging and walk with my pet.
>> I do jumping, swimming, jogging, and walking with my pet.
I want to do activity that strerch my body like yoga and pillates this summer vacation but yoga and pillates is so expensive, I learn at the home as youtube.
>> I want to do activities that stretch my body like yoga and Pilates this summer vacation, but yoga and Pilates are so expensive, so I learn at home through YouTube.
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