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Q; Which do you prefer calling or video chatting? why?
A: I think what I prefer depends on the situation.
I prefer video chatting when I talk to a close person or study. but just calling is good for working and share information quickly.
I prefer to just call if asked which of the two do you prefer.
Video chat is easily disconnected and a little bit of burden, however in the case of a video class, video chatting is preferred.

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Well done, Arthur! Thank you for doing your homework today, I appreciate it. Hopefully, you will be more encourage to do your homework as it will help you a lot in improving your writing and comprehension skills. Below are my corrections for your sentences. Keep it up! ^^
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A: I think what I prefer depends on the situation. I prefer video chatting when I talk to a close person or study. but just calling is good for working and share information quickly. I prefer to just call if asked which of the two do you prefer. Video chat is easily disconnected and a little bit of burden, however in the case of a video class, video chatting is preferred.
>> I think what I prefer depends on the situation. I prefer video chatting when I talk to a close person or when I'm studying but calling is good for working and sharing information quickly. I like to call if you asked me which of the two I prefer. Video chatting can be easily disconnected and a little bit of a burden, however in the case of a video class, video chatting is preferred.
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