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Are there strong laws in your country to prevent discrimination?

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Your answer is too hot policies issue in Korea.
Korean parliament discusses this issue for many years.
Discrimination includes religion, region, and sexual issues.
Gender equality is an important policy issue too, nowadays.

But it can not be consensus what is discrimination.
They didn't think about human equality, they think about only their political interest.
I disgust by politician attitude toward the discrimination law.

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Hi Ye Na,


Thank you for doing your homework! Your effort and dedication are greatly appreciated. Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Your answer is too hot policies issue in Korea.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Your answer touches upon a sensitive policy issue in Korea.
Korean parliament discusses this issue for many years.

>>CORRECT

OR>>The Korean parliament has been discussing this issue for many years.
Discrimination includes religion, region, and sexual issues.

>>CORRECT

Gender equality is an important policy issue too, nowadays.
>>CORRECT

OR>>Gender equality is also an important policy issue nowadays.
But it can not be consensus what is discrimination.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, achieving a consensus on what constitutes discrimination can be challenging.
They didn't think about human equality, they think about only their political interest.

>>CORRECT

OR>>They seem to prioritize their political interests rather than considering human equality.
I disgust by politician attitude toward the discrimination law.

>>I am disgusted by politicians' attitudes towards discrimination laws.
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