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No, I had never call to them.
But, My friend had call to police.
Because she is suffer to noise between floor. She couldn't sleep well and impossible her life.
She tried to offer the solution that reduce noise to her neighbor.
But her neighbor was so selfish. Finally she had call to police.
Her neighbor realized the noise problem's serious.
She have good life at the moment.
The noise between floor is very seriously social problem.
Someone was died because of that. We must considering neighbor's life.

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Happy Thursday, Sae Bom!
 
I hope everything's ok. Goodluck on your test today and tomorrow! I also wanted to say thank you for doing your homework today. See you next week! 

- Kristine ^^ 

No, I had never call to them.
>> No, I had never called them.
But, My friend had call to police.
>> However, my friend had to call the police.
Because she is suffer to noise between floor.
>> Because of the loud noise coming from her apartment building.
She couldn't sleep well and impossible her life.
>> Her life was so hard and she had trouble sleeping.
She tried to offer the solution that reduce noise to her neighbor.
>> She asked her neighbors to minimize the noise.
But her neighbor was so selfish. 
>> Correct.
Finally she had call to police.
>> She finally called the police.
Her neighbor realized the noise p
roblem's serious.
>> Her neighbor realized how severe the noise issue was.
She have good life at the moment.
>> She has a good life now.
The noise between floor is very seriously social problem.
>> Korea has a serious noise issue.
Someone was died because of that. 
>> Because of that, someone committed a suicide.
We must considering neighbor's life.
>> We should always consider our neighbors.

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