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I think I spend a lot of money to show off, to be self-satisfied, to look good to someone.

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I think I spend a lot of money to show off, to be self-satisfied, to look good to someone.
A couple of million-a-piece outfit is used for show-off or self-satisfaction, and the clothes that can be worn under certain circumstances seem to be trying to look good on people.
For example, I think that's the case when you don't wear anything that stands out more than a bride at a wedding, but you usually wear a black suit at a funeral.

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Hi Da Hye,


Great job on finishing your homework! Your message really captures the idea of spending money to show off, feel good about yourself, and impress others. Your examples, like not wearing anything that attracts more attention than a bride at a wedding and choosing a black suit for a funeral, show how we dress differently for specific occasions. I appreciate your personal perspective on the message. Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Cathy


I think I spend a lot of money to show off, to be self-satisfied, to look good to someone.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I feel like I sometimes spend a significant amount of money to impress others, boost my own satisfaction, or simply appear more attractive to someone.

A couple of million-a-piece outfit is used for show-off or self-satisfaction, and the clothes that can be worn under certain circumstances seem to be trying to look good on people.

>>People sometimes wear extravagant outfits worth millions of dollars each to showcase their wealth and seek personal satisfaction. Additionally, there are specific clothing choices made to create a favorable impression in certain circumstances

For example, I think that's the case when you don't wear anything that stands out more than a bride at a wedding, but you usually wear a black suit at a funeral.

>>CORRECT

OR>>For example, it is generally expected to dress modestly and avoid outshining the bride at a wedding, whereas wearing a black suit is customary for attending a funeral.

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