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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What would life be like without your computer?


I often think How did people spend time in the past days when there was without computers.
Now days, develop of computers today, a lot of people the level of culture,hobbies,information,
and knowledge has increasing.
And personal computers was became a necessity.
These days, AI technology is using through computers.
Using AI, pictures,music, and presentations are make faster than humans did.
In addition, a few days ago I watched various language education programs through AI.
But, I think still there is have a misinformation and delicate work is lacking.
However, new technologies will be soon develop and they will get pros and cons.
Anyway, I cannot deny that life is comfortable through computer.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What would life be like without your computer?



I often think How did people spend time in the past days when there was without computers.
>> I often think how did people spend time in the past when there was no computers.
OR >> I often think how did people spend time in the past when computers weren't discovered yet.
Now days, develop of computers today, a lot of people the level of culture,hobbies,information, and knowledge has increasing.
>> Nowadays, because of the development of computers, a lot of people increased the level of culture, hobbies, information, and knowledge.
And personal computers was became a necessity.
>> Personal computers have become a necessity.
These days, AI technology is using through computers.
>> These days, AI technology is used in computers.
Using AI, pictures,music, and presentations are make faster than humans did.
>> Using AI, pictures, music, and presentations are made faster than what humans normally do.
In addition, a few days ago I watched various language education programs through AI.
>> CORRECT!
But, I think still there is have a misinformation and delicate work is lacking.
>> But, I think misinformation is widespread and delicate work is still lacking.
However, new technologies will be soon develop and they will get pros and cons.
>> However, new technologies will soon be developed, and as expected, there would be pros and cons.
Anyway, I cannot deny that life is comfortable through computer.
>> Anyway, I cannot deny that life is comfortable with computers.

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