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Do you normally go to one doctor in particular or any available doctor?

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After I grew up, I usually go to any available doctor. Because the frequency of visiting hospitals for me decreased. Nevertheless, many people tend to meet doctors whom they once visited . When I was young I went to the particular hospital according to my symptoms. The main doctors who usually examine me was arranged so I can remember those doctors. Espcially, when I have some symtoms about runny noses and nosebleed, I go to the ear-nose-and-throat department. I thought the doctor was not a kind person, but I guess that he is good at treating because he runned a hospital for a long time in one place. The nurses also almost remained so many patients are familiar with the hospital overall. Furthermore, a drug store is located right next to it that has long history alike the hospital. I can remember I measure my height by the tool on the wall whenever I go to get a prescription.

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Happy Wednesday, Ko Eun!
I hope you are okay since you were not able to attend the class today. Anyway, good job with your homework. It's nice to know that you are raised not to fear doctors and that you have a nice experience when visiting hospitals and pharmacies.
- T. Caitlyn
After I grew up, I usually go to any available doctor. Because the frequency of visiting hospitals for me decreased. 
>> After I grew up, I usually go to any available doctor because the frequency of visiting hospitals for me decreased.
Nevertheless, many people tend to meet doctors whom they once visited . 
>> CORRECT
When I was young I went to the particular hospital according to my symptoms. 
>> CORRECT
The main doctors who usually examine me was arranged so I can remember those doctors. 
>> The main doctors who usually examined me were arranged so that I could remember them.
Espcially, when I have some symtoms about runny noses and nosebleed, I go to the ear-nose-and-throat department. 
>> Especially when I have symptoms like runny noses and nosebleeds, I go to the ear, nose, and throat department.
I thought the doctor was not a kind person, but I guess that he is good at treating because he runned a hospital for a long time in one place. 
>> I thought the doctor was not a kind person, but I guess that he is good at treating because he ran a hospital for a long time in one place.
The nurses also almost remained so many patients are familiar with the hospital overall. 
>> CORRECT
Furthermore, a drug store is located right next to it that has long history alike the hospital. 
>> Furthermore, a drug store is located right next to it that has a long history, just like the hospital.
I can remember I measure my height by the tool on the wall whenever I go to get a prescription.
>> CORRECT
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