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Q: What is the importance of communication between a father and child?
A: I think they know each other more than before by communicating.
Communication is the only way to share each other's information, so without it, they can't know each other.
And that can make their relationship worse than before.

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Good way to go, Paul! Thank you for expressing your thoughts about the questions. You did fantastic! ^^
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A: I think they know each other more than before by communicating. Communication is the only way to share each other's information, so without it, they can't know each other. And that can make their relationship worse than before.
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