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My pet lived with me for a long time and had many memories together and they are like my family

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That's so wholesome to know, Jeny. ^^ Based on what you've told me in our classes, they really feel like close family to you.  I know you're treating them well, and that's why they also love you~ 
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My pet lived with me for a long time and had many memories together and they are like my family
>> My pets have lived with me for a long time, we shared many memories together, and they are like my family.
(We use "pets" here because you said "they" at the end of your sentence, indicating that there's more than one pet. ^^)
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