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Actually, the most interesting adventure of my childhood is imagination
I played with my younger sister and younger brother.
Most memorablely, we huddled together in a small secret base made of tables, chairs, and blankets and had a strategic meeting.
I think the memories of laughing and chatting with each other in that little pile of blankets are the best adventure we can't do now.
So I remember the family's adventure with my brothers in my house the most.

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Hi Da Hye,

Great job on completing your homework! I really enjoyed reading about your favorite adventure from childhood. It sounds like your most interesting adventure was using your imagination while playing with your younger sister and brother. I loved how you built a secret base with tables, chairs, and blankets, and had strategic meetings together. It must have been so much fun laughing and chatting in that cozy pile of blankets. Those memories of playing and bonding with your siblings are truly special. Even though you can't do the same things now, you can always treasure those adventures in your heart. Remember to continue making new and wonderful memories with your family. Keep up the good work in your studies!

~Teacher Cathy

 

Actually, the most interesting adventure of my childhood is imagination.

>>The most interesting adventure of my childhood is imagination.

I played with my younger sister and younger brother.

>>CORRECT

Most memorablely, we huddled together in a small secret base made of tables, chairs, and blankets and had a strategic meeting.

>>Most memorably, we huddled together in a small secret base made of tables, chairs, and blankets and had a strategic meeting.

I think the memories of laughing and chatting with each other in that little pile of blankets are the best adventure we can't do now.

>>CORRECT

So I remember the family's adventure with my brothers in my house the most.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Of all the memories, the one that remains strongest in my mind is the family's adventure with my brothers in my house.

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