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Maybe it's because some people want to invite them to their place and share their sympathy and joy. On days when my house is well organized and my body and mind are soft, I want to invite someone to my house and have a good time drinking tea or eating together.

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Hi, Eliana!
I totally agreed n what you said. They want to share their oy, some people interpret such invitation in a wong way.
Have you attended a housewarming party? Oh, it's really fun to see someone's new house.
Happy weekend!
Aki~

Maybe it's because some people want to invite them to their place and share their sympathy and joy.
>>> CORRECT!

On days when my house is well organized and my body and mind are soft, I want to invite someone to my house and have a good time drinking tea or eating together.
>>> CORRECT!
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