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I usually try to hard ride out a ghost.
And I think that the human is most fearest.
Because the ghost appear anywhere because of the one who is bad man or woman.
Beside, the real story that is about the ghost allways based on the human's bad action.
But I'm very fear when I look at the ghost.

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Happy Friday, Sae Bom! 

Thank you very much for completing your homework despite your busy schedule these days. Best wishes on your dance performance today! 

- Kristine ^^ 


I usually try to hard ride out a ghost.
>> I try my best to outlive a ghost.
And I think that the human is most fearest.
>> I also feel that humans are more terrifying.
Because the ghost appear anywhere because of the one who is bad man or woman.
>> Because a ghost might be either a bad or a good spirit.
Beside, the real story that is about the ghost allways based on the human's bad action.
>> Furthermore, every true ghost stories focus on a person's wrongdoing.
But I'm very fear when I look at the ghost.
>> I'm so frightened every time I see a ghost.
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