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When you were little, what was your favorite thing to do?

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Well, I used to play the baseball and basketball. Most likely the thing what I played is the basketball during the lunch break time. Just hanging out with my friends that I really miss. And, another one is a date of long distance. She's older than me with a year. When she got hired to work far way from me, I always took a subway for meeting her for 3 hours. In the first time, I thought 'I'm okay, that would be a worth!'. But, as time went, my mind was changed. :)

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Well, I used to play the baseball and basketball.
>>> Well, I used to play baseball and basketball.

Most likely the thing what I played is the basketball during the lunch break time.
>>> Most likely, the thing I played was basketball during the lunch break.

Just hanging out with my friends that I really miss.
>>> CORRECT.

And, another one is a date of long distance. 
>>> And another one is a long-distance date.

She's older than me with a year. 
>>> She's a year older than me.

When she got hired to work far way from me, I always took a subway for meeting her for 3 hours.
>>> When she got hired to work far away from me, I always took the subway to meet her for 3 hours.

In the first time, I thought 'I'm okay, that would be a worth!
>>> For the first time, I thought, I'm okay, that would be worth it!

But, as time went, my mind was changed. 
>>> But as time went by, my mind changed.




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