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How much money do you think a grade schooler should receive as an allowance?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: Le*
2023-06-08 1150

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These days, there are controversy about receiving allowance. Some people say parents should give allowance, but others say parents should not give allowance. However, I think that parents should give allowance, and I think the allowance for the month is 30000 won.
It is because it is easier to calculate, and it's the right money to learn economy.
First, it's easy to calculate. It's because 1 month is 30days, and the money is 30000won, it is 1000 won a day.
Second, we can learn economy by saving money, and budjeting. And 30000won is the right money.
Because of these two reasons, 30000won for allowance is the right money.

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Thank you for this Leo. Your explanation is reasonable, for kids who don't need to spend much on anything in a day.

These days, there are controversy about receiving allowance. 
>>> These days, there are controversies about receiving an allowance.   
Some people say parents should give allowance, but others say parents should not give allowance. 
>>> correct  
However, I think that parents should give allowance, and I think the allowance for the month is 30000 won.
>>> However, I think that parents should give an allowance and I think the allowance for the month should be 30000 won.  
It is because it is easier to calculate, and it's the right money to learn economy.
>>> correct   
First, it's easy to calculate. 
>>> correct   
It's because 1 month is 30days, and the money is 30000won, it is 1000 won a day.
>>It's because 1 month has 30 days and the money is 30000 won. It is 1000 won a day.   
Second, we can learn economy by saving money, and budjeting. 
>>> Second, we can learn about economy by saving money and budgeting.   
And 30000won is the right money.
>>30000 won is the right amount of money. 
Because of these two reasons, 30000won for allowance is the right money.
>>> Because of these two reasons, 30000won for an allowance is the right amount of money.  
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