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Fraud is one of the worst crimes.

They scam people who are weaker, less smart, and less strong than they are.

They are very mean because they use others weakpoint, affection and trust.

I despise such people .

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Hi, Ms. Lily!
In every situation, they are two people involved, the offender and the victim. I guess we really need to be careful with people whom we do not know.
Have a great day. Talk to you later.
Aki~


Fraud is one of the worst crimes.
>> CORRECT!

They scam people who are weaker, less smart, and less strong than they are.
>> CORRECT!

They are very mean because they use others weakpoint, affection and trust.
>> They are very mean people because they use others' weak points, affection, and trust.

I despise such people.
>> CORRECT!

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