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How do you deal with a busy schedule? Do you usually finish everything you need to finish?

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How do you deal with a busy schedule? Do you usually finish everything you need to finish?

I usually deal with my busy schedule use phone calendar. When I was student (include university), I was remembered everything. Such as my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately. But decrease with age, my brain memory is not good. So, if I don’t use calendar or memo, I don’t remember anything.
And I was very planned person in the past. But, these days, I become a lazy person. For example, in the past if daily homework or project was on that time finished. But now I often delayed my work or plan etc. so, I was decided don’t delayed everything. And I effort do that.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Hyo Won! It's good that you are putting effort in trying to do better with planning and doing your tasks. Keep it up! See you in class. 

I usually deal with my busy schedule use phone calendar. 
>>> I usually deal with my busy schedule using phone calendar. 
>>> OR: I usually deal with my busy schedule with the aid of the phone calendar.    
When I was student (include university), I was remembered everything. Such as my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately. 
>>>  When I was a student (include university), I was able to remember everything such as when my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately. 
>>> OR: When I was a student (include university), I always remembered everything such as when my friend asked me, “What class next time?” or “Where are we supposed to meet?” and then I answered immediately. 
But decrease with age, my brain memory is not good. 
>>> But  with age, my brain memory is not as good.   
So, if I don’t use calendar or memo, I don’t remember anything.
>>>  correct 
And I was very planned person in the past. 
>>>  Moreover, I used to be a person who planned a lot in the past. 
But, these days, I become a lazy person. 
>>>  correct 
For example, in the past if daily homework or project was on that time finished. But now I often delayed my work or plan etc.
>>> For example, in the past, daily homework or project was finished on time but now I often delayed my work or plan, etc.  
so, I was decided don’t delayed everything. And I effort do that.
>>> As a result, I have decided not to delay everything and I make an effort to do that.
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