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I don't think there was a particularly memorable graduation ceremony.
At least, I wanted to look cool at my high school graduation ceremony, so I went to the graduation ceremony wearing makeup that didn't suit me and clothes that didn't suit me, and there are still photos of the dark history.

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Good day, Eliana!
I remember when I graduated from the university. My family had a party first before the graduation exercise because a lot of people were busy on the day of my graduation so they couldn't come.
Thank you for sharing your story too and it is funny how you described your high school graduation. Well, they are already memories to reminisce.
Have a good day!
Aki~

I don't think there was a particularly memorable graduation ceremony.
>>> CORRECT!

At least, I wanted to look cool at my high school graduation ceremony, so I went to the graduation ceremony wearing makeup that didn't suit me and clothes that didn't suit me, and there are still photos of the dark history.
>>> CORRECT!

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