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Should Sex education be mandatory in high schools?

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2023-06-06 1222

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I don't think so. Because I believe we should learn faster than high school. If you're a student in high school, you're all grown up. So, I think we should get it before then. You know Mike? most of parents don't know how necessary they are in Korea. Just they will be busy to cover the education of sex. Also, they tend to feel shy and embarrassed. They don't think it's important.

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Good day, Elic! You are smarter than you think; stronger than you can ever imagine, all you need is to go for that dream. Start today and you will reach the destination.

I don't think so.
>>> I don't think sex education should be mandatory in high school.

Because I believe we should learn faster than high school.
>>> Because I believe we should learn about sex education before we enter high school.

If you're a student in high school, you're all grown up.
>>> CORRECT.

So, I think we should get it before then.
>>> CORRECT.

You know Mike? most of parents don't know how necessary they are in Korea.
>>> You know Mika? Most parents don't know how necessary sex education is in Korea.

Just they will be busy to cover the education of sex.
>>> CORRECT.

Also, they tend to feel shy and embarrassed.
>>> CORRECT.

They don't think it's important.
>>> CORRECT.

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