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The fear affect to my sleep.
I image suddenly com out ghost on the closet when I go to bed.
And I'm able to think about it that I watch at horror program.
Furthermore I had saw the ghost in the high school when I was ninteen.
It was very scared. I was image vivid the ghost appearance at the moment.
The ghost had too long hair and wearing white dress.

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 Good morning, Sae Bom!

Some people become overwhelmed by fear and want to avoid situations that might make them frightened or anxious. It can be hard to break this cycle, but there are lots of ways to do it. You can learn to feel less fearful and to cope with anxiety so that it doesn't stop you from living.

- Khristine ^^ 

The fear affect to my sleep.
>> Fear interferes my sleep.
I image suddenly com out ghost on the closet when I go to bed.
>> I sometimes imagine a ghost coming out of the closet when I go to bed.
And I'm able to think about it that I watch at horror program.
>> The thought came from watching horrifying programs.
Furthermore I had saw the ghost in the high school when I was ninteen.
>> I saw a ghost at my high school building when I was nineteen.
It was very scared. 
>> It was terrifying.
I was image vivid the ghost appearance at the moment.
>> I couldn't stop thinking about the ghost at that moment.
The ghost had too long hair and wearing white dress.
>> The ghos at had long hair and was dressed in a white gown.
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