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I don't help people.
When I was helping someone on the street, they took me to a strange place
I ran away, but I don't want to go through it again.
So I don't help people.

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Hi Da Hye,

Great job completing your homework! I understand that you had a bad experience when you tried to help someone on the street, and it made you not want to help people anymore. It's important to prioritize your safety and well-being. While it's okay to be cautious, it's also important to remember that not every situation will be the same. Some people may genuinely need help, and helping them can make a positive difference. Just make sure to trust your instincts and prioritize your safety. If you feel unsure about helping someone, there are other ways to contribute, like donating to charities or volunteering in safe environments. Keep up the good work in your studies! See you later. ^^

~Teacher Cathy

 

I don't help people.

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When I was helping someone on the street, they took me to a strange place

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I ran away, but I don't want to go through it again.

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OR>>I ran away, however, I don¡¯t want to experience that again.

So I don't help people.

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