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Answer : What do you think are the benefits of marriage?

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2023-06-05 520

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I think that it is nice to live in the same house together.
It is a blessing to have a partner for my life.
And as like me person who loves baby wants to get marry.
These days there are so many persons who doesn't get marry.
That's reasons are many things. because of money or comfortable life, etc..
But what is clear is that marriage is blessing.

ft. I'm so sorry because i just got appointment with my friend.
I always thank for your teaching.
but i'm worry because i have two chances about delaying our class.
After i consume all chances, If i get appointment, i must to pause our class. and after 2 days, i must to restart our class
but when i restart our class, i'm not sure there is time left for your class.
see you for wednesday.

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It's nice to hear from a different perspective, as some of my students prefer not to get married, like you mentioned, with the same reasons. ^^ I understand that it is also declared in the Bible that marriage is a blessing.  I'm really happy that you're married and you're starting your own family! 

In terms of your explanation for postponing today's class, I appreciate you telling me all about it to make sure that I am aware. :) I understand that you also have a busy life, and your current schedule with me isn't exactly the perfect time for you, so I am very grateful for your efforts.  I hope we can continue studying in the future! See you on Wednesday, Steven. 
~T.Harmony <3


I think that it is nice to live in the same house together. 
>> CORRECT!
It is a blessing to have a partner for my life.
>> CORRECT!
And as like me person who loves baby wants to get marry.
>> And for a person like me who loves babies, I want to get married.
These days there are so many persons who doesn't get marry.
>> Lately, there has been a lot of people who choose to not get married.
That's reasons are many things. 
>> They have a lot of reasons.
because of money or comfortable life, etc..
>> CORRECT!
But what is clear is that marriage is blessing.
>> ...marriage is a blessing.

ft. I'm so sorry because i just got appointment with my friend.
>> CORRECT!
I always thank for your teaching.
>> I'm always thankful for your teaching.
but i'm worry because i have two chances about delaying our class.
>> But I'm worried because I only have two chances to delay our class.
After i consume all chances, If i get appointment, i must to pause our class. 
>> After I consume all chances, if I have another appointment, I must pause our class again.
and after 2 days, i must to restart our class
>> ..., I must restart our class.
but when i restart our class, i'm not sure there is time left for your class.
>> ..., I'm not sure if there will still be an available time for your class.
see you for wednesday.
>> See you on Wednesday.
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