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Keeping in touch with people is necessary to maintain a good relationship. Do you agree? In what way

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Keeping in touch with people is necessary to maintain a good relationship. Do you agree? In what way?

I agree that. If don¡¯t contact with family, the relationship is drifted apart each other. Even so, busy to each other keep in touch with closer people. actually meeting each other rather than Calling is very good situation. But, if time not enough, contact your persons at least.

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Thank you for this Hyo Won!

I agree that. 
>>> I agree to that.    
If don¡¯t contact with family, the relationship is drifted apart each other. 
>>>  If I don¡¯t contact with family, the relationship is drifted apart from each other.   
Even so, busy to each other keep in touch with closer people. 
>>> Despite being busy, we should keep in touch with close people.   
Actually, meeting each other rather than just calling is a very good situation. 
>>> correct  
But, if time not enough, contact your persons at least.
>>> But, if time is not enough, contact your persons at least.   
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