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How should someone who committed a crime for some good cause be punished? Example: Robinhood
>>> Someone who committed a crime for some good cause must be punished, because if they aren't punished, the legal system can collapse. However I think they have to get their punishment less than other criminals because of some good cause.

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Hello Steve!
I like your answer here. It just shows that no one is above the law. In society, regardless of the intention, what the law has said should be done and must be done to whoever it applies.
Have a great day and I hope to see you again!
T. Aki~

Someone who committed a crime for some good cause must be punished because if they aren't punished, the legal system can collapse. However, I think they have to get their punishment less than other criminals because of some good cause.
>> CORRECT!
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