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There are a lot of the effects since the global warning started such as the disasters, rising surface of the sea, rising temperature of the sea, and the air pollution. You know? an earthquake was not common in Korea before. But since it started for the global warning. Except for that, Tsunami, hurricane something like this. It begins common

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You know? an earthquake was not common in Korea before.
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But since it started for the global warning.
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