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When people say ¡°Life is university.¡± they mean that university is the most important thing in life. In Korea, everyone thinks so, and that's why university is so important. They say that as long as you go to a good university, you will have a good job and a good life. That is why people risk their lives for the CSAT.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


When people say ¡°Life is university.¡± they mean that university is the most important thing in life. 
>>> When people say ¡°Life is university.¡± they mean that university is the most essential thing in life. 

In Korea, everyone thinks so, and that's why university is so important. 
>>> In Korea, everyone thinks so, and that's why the university is so important. 

They say that as long as you go to a good university, you will have a good job and a good life. 
>>> They say that as long as you attend a good university, you will have a good job and life. 

That is why people risk their lives for the CSAT.
>>> CORRECT!
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