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My answer is no.
Because I remember the pain.
And it feels more painful than I remember.
It is very hard thing to forgive people.
So I can't forgive anyone else.
So I'm waiting for me to become insensitive to the pain.
If I can, I will forgive other.

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Hi Da Hye,

Thank you for the effort you put into completing your homework. Your response is honest and reflects your personal experience and feelings. I understand that forgiveness can be a challenging and complex process, especially when we have experienced pain in the past. It takes time and healing to come to terms with what has happened and find the strength to forgive. Remember, forgiveness is a personal journey, and it's okay to take the time you need to heal and become more resilient. It's important to prioritize your own well-being and emotional growth. If and when you feel ready, the possibility of forgiveness may open up for you. Until then, be patient with yourself and continue to focus on your own healing process. I'm here to support you along the way. Keep up the great work, and don't hesitate to reach out if you have any questions or need further assistance.

~Teacher Cathy

 

My answer is no.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I disagree.

Because I remember the pain.

>>CORRECT

And it feels more painful than I remember.

>>CORRECT

It is very hard thing to forgive people.

>>It is very hard to forgive people.

So I can't forgive anyone else.

>>CORRECT

OR>>So, I cannot tolerate anyone else.

So I'm waiting for me to become insensitive to the pain.

>>So, I¡¯m waiting for myself to become insensitive to the pain.

If I can, I will forgive other.

>>If I can, I will forgive others.

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