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I want to make several sentences with using a word 'acupuncture' for practice.
1) I'm going to try acupuncture to get free from suffering from chronic back pain. [ I don't want to use the word 'from' twice in this sentence but cannot find how to.. :( ]
2) My mom said he is the best acupuncturist ever that she had seen.
3) I was scared when I saw the doctor was performing acupuncture to my grandmother.

__________

1. She was here yesterday, wasn't she?
2. That looks possible, doesn't it
3. She recognized you, didn't she?
4. I waited for an hour, didn't I?
5. She asked me a question, didn't she?
6. He wished me on my birthday, didn't he?
7. The police have caught the thief, haven't they?
8. The man suffered serious injuries, didn't he?
9. You wrote to her, didn't you?
10. It rained yesterday, didn't it?

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Hello there Yu Jin!

Thanks for answering you homework. You did well. Keep it up!

Have a great day ahead and I'll talk to you in our next class.

~~ T. Jeny ^^


I want to make several sentences with using a word 'acupuncture' for practice.
>>I want to make several sentences using the word 'acupuncture' for practice.
1) I'm going to try acupuncture to get free from suffering from chronic back pain. 
>>correct
OR>>I'm going to try acupuncture to free my suffering from chronic back pain. 
[ I don't want to use the word 'from' twice in this sentence but cannot find how to.. :( ]
>>[ I don't want to use the word 'from' twice in this sentence but I cannot find how to.. :( ]
2) My mom said he is the best acupuncturist ever that she had seen.
>>correct
3) I was scared when I saw the doctor was performing acupuncture to my grandmother.

>>I was scared when I saw the doctor performing acupuncture on my grandmother.
__________

1. She was here yesterday, wasn't she?
>>correct
2. That looks possible, doesn't it
>>correct
3. She recognized you, didn't she?
>>correct
4. I waited for an hour, didn't I?
>>correct
5. She asked me a question, didn't she?
>>correct
6. He wished me on my birthday, didn't he?
>>correct
7. The police have caught the thief, haven't they?
>>correct
8. The man suffered serious injuries, didn't he?
>>correct
9. You wrote to her, didn't you?
>>correct
10. It rained yesterday, didn't it?
>>correct
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