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Answer : How is your younger self different from the person you are today?

작성자: 정*희
2023-05-31 564

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Your question is good. these days, i'm just some depressed.
Because i'm fat after wedding. Before i marriaged, my body is ballanced and lean constitution.
But after i marriaged and didn't excercise, By so fast pace my body become fat.
My chin fat become also sagged (English word of person's body is very difficult)
Exactly, i must to do either excercising or eatting ballanced.

ft. The reason that i did our class without video cam is of course i don't have camera in my computer.
But second reason is you see only my fat appearance and don't know my younger appearance.
Then you'll think this is who I am. i'm never agree.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

I appreciate this very detailed answer, Steven.  I admire your perseverance to compose something like this in English despite the difficulties. I'm proud of you!  What matters to me is that you're a very kind student, who is doing his best to become a good family man by strengthening his faith in the Lord.  Thank you for your answer, Steven! 
~T.Harmony <3

Your question is good. 
>> CORRECT!
these days, i'm just some depressed.
>> I've been feeling a bit depressed these days.
Because i'm fat after wedding. 
>> Because I became fat after my wedding.
OR>> Because I gained weight after my wedding.
Before i marriaged, my body is ballanced and lean constitution.
>> Before I got married, my body was lean and had a balanced condition.
But after i marriaged and didn't excercise, By so fast pace my body become fat.
>> But after my marriage, I didn't exercise and everything went by so fast that my body soon became fat. 
My chin fat become also sagged (English word of person's body is very difficult)
>> The fat under my chin started to sag.
OR>> I developed a double chin. (The expression "double chin" is when the fat under the chin sags and it ends up looking like there are two chins. I understand that it's hard, so I appreciate your effort, Steven! You're doing great. ^^)
Exactly, i must to do either excercising or eatting ballanced.
>> I must exercise or eat a balanced diet.
ft. The reason that i did our class without video cam is of course i don't have camera in my computer.
>> The reason behind my camera always being turned off during our classes is because I don't have a camera in my computer.
But second reason is you see only my fat appearance and don't know my younger appearance.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> ...you're not aware of my younger appearance.
Then you'll think this is who I am. 
>> CORRECT!
i'm never agree.
>> I'll never agree with that.
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