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It depends on the person.
I like to stay at home on holidays.
But some people like to go somewhere on holidays.

I like sofa and bed.
Because it lowers my stress and makes me feel peaceful.

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Hi Da Hye,

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and experiences. As a real estate agent, I understand that your job can be demanding and tiring. It's important to find ways to relax and rejuvenate. Remember to prioritize self-care and find a healthy balance between your professional responsibilities and personal relaxation. Taking breaks and finding moments to rejuvenate can enhance your overall productivity and happiness. Keep up the good work, and don't forget to take care of yourself.

~Teacher Cathy

 

It depends on the person.

>>CORRECT
I like to stay at home on holidays.

>>CORRECT
But some people like to go somewhere on holidays.
>> But some people like to go somewhere on holiday.
I like sofa and bed.

>> I enjoy sitting on the sofa and resting in bed.
Because it lowers my stress and makes me feel peaceful.

>>CORRECT 

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