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The best ways for art to be appreciated by people

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Most of people aren¡¯t interested in art like me. So it is important to stir people to art. So free exhibition is beat way to stir people to art. They can admire art and relax there for free. After stirring people to art enough, you should change from free to paying for it.

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Hello Mark, good day! Thank you for sharing your honest opinion about art. Some people find art interesting and some don't. We can discuss more about art in class. I will see you again tomorrow. Take good care of yourself!~T. Lyn
Most of people aren¡¯t interested in art like me.
>>Most people aren't interested in art like I am.
So it is important to stir people to art.
>>That's why it's so important to move people with art.
So free exhibition is beat way to stir people to art. 
>>Soo, having free exhibits are the evst way to impress people with art.
They can admire art and relax there for free. 
>>They can appreciate and relax there for free.
After stirring people to art enough, you should change from free to paying for it.
>>Once people have impressed enough with art, it's time to switch from being free to paying for it.
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