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When I think of Australia, the image that comes to my mind is that of a laid-back city.
It seems that people on the street are very leisurely and there is plenty of leisure to see them walking their dogs on the beach.
In the meantime, it seems that the only people who move busily are Asian friends who are studying there.

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Great day, Eliana!
We all have a different perception of a certain country. In my case, I consider Australia as a strong, independent country that does not need the help of America or China. And I agree with you that it is a laid- back country because of the privileges that their citizens have,
Thank you today, the rain is pouring heavily as of this moment. Take care!
Aki~

When I think of Australia, the image that comes to my mind is that of a laid-back city.
>>> When I think of Australia, the image that comes to my mind is that of a laid-back country.

It seems that people on the street are very leisurely and there is plenty of leisure to see them walking their dogs on the beach.
>>> CORRECT!

In the meantime, it seems that the only people who move busily are Asian friends who are studying there.
>>> CORRECT!

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