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The most impressive talent that I was listening in a beauty pageant is smart brain.
She has even most beautiful appearance in the beauty pageant.
She graduated seoul university. These university is most famous and hardly for enter in korea.
She has all that appearance, talent, inner beauty.

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Good morning, Sae Bom! 

 Beauty isn't just superficial, and is actually a key part of how we understand and interact with the world around us. Beauty helps us form relationships with our environment, from food to landscape to art, and even with each other.

- Kristine ^^

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She has even most beautiful appearance in the beauty pageant.
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She graduated seoul university. 
>> She graduated from Seoul University.
These university is most famous and hardly for enter in korea.
>> This university is the most well-known yet challenging to get accepted in.
She has all that appearance, talent, inner beauty.
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