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Living in a new country would be a big change for anybody. What do you think would be the biggest challenge about living in a foreign country?

First of all language is very important and difficult challenge for living foreign country. Communication is very important anybody. But if different language each other, communication is difficult. The second, food style is very important. People living a life, eating is the most important thing. So, every country has their food style. For example, Vietnam and Thailand peoples add to cilantro at the soup dishes. But, I don¡¯t like it. So, person like me, hard for eating style at Vietnam.
Lastly, religion is important factor. Such as in India¡¯s Hinduism is famous of don¡¯t eat the cow. Because they admire to cow. So, peoples of eating cow would not adapt to Hinduism country.

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Thank you for this Hyo Won. Food is indeed a source of happiness.

First of all language is very important and difficult challenge for living foreign country. 
>>> First of all, language is very important and a difficult challenge for living in a foreign country.   
Communication is very important anybody. 
>>>  Communication is very important for anybody.  
But if different language each other, communication is difficult. 
>>>  But if we speak in a different language with each other, communication is difficult.  
The second, food style is very important. 
>>> correct  
People living a life, eating is the most important thing. 
>>> For people living a life, eating is the most important thing. 
So, every country has their food style. 
>>>  correct    
For example, Vietnam and Thailand peoples add to cilantro at the soup dishes. 
>>> For example, Vietnam and Thailand people add cilantro to the soup dishes.   
But, I don¡¯t like it. 
>>> correct  
So, person like me, hard for eating style at Vietnam.
>>>   So, for a person like me, it's hard to adapt to their eating style in Vietnam.
Lastly, religion is an important factor. 
>>>  correct 
Such as in India¡¯s Hinduism is famous of don¡¯t eat the cow. Because they admire to cow. 
>>>  Such as in India¡¯s Hinduism, it is famous to not eat cow because they admire and worship cows. 
So, peoples of eating cow would not adapt to Hinduism country.
>>>   So, people who eat cow would not adapt well in a Hinduism country.

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