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No. but I have been to went to conferece with my boss. The conference was very important that we have to confirm about when our company move the another area. My office is very old so we have to move the area. Anyway so I could meet another manager, I was so happy and amazing.

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No. but I have been to went to conferece with my boss. 
>> No, but I have been to a conference with my boss.
The conference was very important that we have to confirm about when our company move the another area. 
>>The conference was very important as it helped us confirm when our company will move to another area.
My office is very old so we have to move the area.
>> Our office is very old, so we have to move to a new area. 
Anyway so I could meet another manager, I was so happy and amazing.
>> Anyway, when I had the opportunity to meet another manager, I felt so happy and amazed.
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