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My favorite animation character is Miles Morales Spider-Man in ¡®Spider-Man into the spider verse¡¯ because the suit he is wearing is splendid. It was fantastic when he spread his suit with spray. And when he is wearing his hoodie on the suit, it seems more fantastic.

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Hi Scott!

See you later in our class ^^

T. DON

My favorite animation character is Miles Morales Spider-Man in ¡®Spider-Man into the spider verse¡¯ because the suit he is wearing is splendid. It was fantastic when he spread his suit with spray. And when he is wearing his hoodie on the suit, it seems more fantastic.

>> My favorite animation character is Miles Morales in ¡®Spider-Man into the spider verse¡¯ because the suit he is wearing is splendid. It was fantastic when he spread his suit with spray. And when he is wearing his hoodie on the suit, it looks more fantastic.



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